Awsome! Lurve the style! Lol

:reads advanced critique encouraged: ;_; I'm not a skilled anough artist to critique.

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*is not skilled enough to critique either*

It's better than my attempts at realism...

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Wow! I envy you. <333
I wish I could do that with pink.

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*doesnt quite think she's skilled enough to critique either, but...*

To be honest, I wouldnt have known it was an attempt at realism without reading the description, kuz well... the hair is prolly the most noticeable thing in the pic, and I think it looks really awesome, but it prolly shoulda been more... strand-y..? |D;; And, just a really minor detail, but the collar.. ehh..... most fabric-thingies arent... pointy....? |D;;

Buuuuuut~ Overall, I think the pic is really nice, 'specially the feathers.. and the hair.. and the... flow-y-ness.. xD;

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awsome!! yay for pink....ness... ^^
how can we point and laught at that..??
hmm..im not good enough to critique.. so I'll just say this.. If youre planning on coloring it..maybe you should make the lines a bit thinner and cleaner..? or idk.. >__< anyways.. nice job!! *runs away*

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*_*....that = SEX

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Wut! I didn't think of those! -frantic wriggling- Argh, you're right! I'll definitely have to fix the hair and clothes, what glaring mistakes. . .

xwx;; Thank you for the (excellent, you have mad skill) criticism, I really appreciate it.

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Thank you. It is a new style, still needs some polishin'. . .

But even if you say you don't have skills, you have eyes, right! Human sensibility should tell you if anything looks off. And any criticism helps, give it a shot, I'd appreciate it. <33

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oh man, such awesomeness! *_*

psh, every time I try at realism I fall flat on my face. I really love the thick outline you gave this, and the angle on the face. and.. everything else as well. even though its not perfectly realistic looking, its got this awesome semi-realistic style that really works. nice job. <3

I also think its spiffy how the feathers are like emphasis lines or something, very cool effect there *thumbs-up*

Use Protection Children! ;D

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